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Bhai apko story ki starting rick se karni chahiye thi family ke bare mai bad mai btana chahiye tha
but fir bhi story achi lag rahi hai
agar daily update doge toh story track pr aram se aajeyegi
so keep posting update daily
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UPDATE 13

jaisa ke mene aap sabko bataya tha ke raj ne dusri shaadi karli thi par iss baat se rick dada khush nahi the isiliye unhone unke ek khash aadmi ko call ki or use ek jagah par bulaya.

fir rick ke dada us aadmi se milne apne secret jagah par pahoch gaye kuch der baad wo aadmi bhi aa gaya.
dono ne beth ke bate suru ki.

rick ke dada - to vijay mene tume ek khas baat kehne ke liye bulaya hain.

vijay - ji boliye sir muje kya karna hain.

rick ke dada - tumhe pata hain ke tumpe apne bete se bhi jyada bharosa karta hun .
vijay - ji sir me jaanta hun .

rick ke dada - to tumhe hamari wo wali sari jaydat or paise wakht aane par rick naam karna honga or use saari baat batani hongi.

vijay - ok sir , wo to kar hi dunga par kya sab baat batadun .

rick ke dada - haa sari ki sari baat tumhe use batani hongi kyu ke wohi hain jo iska badla le sakta hain. or muje to raj par bilkul ab bharosa raha hi nahi hain.

vijay - ji sir me samaj sakta hun.

rick ke dada - ok to ab me chalta hun or meri baat yaad rakhna kyu ke me sirf tum par hi bharosa karta hun.

vijay - thik hain sir aapka kaam wakht aane par ho jayenga.

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nice update bro
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pr update thoda bada hota toh maza aa jata
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Nice update bhai. I read whole update of story and it is really faboulus the good thing about the story is plot and simplicity but if you try to publish your story by giving the link of story in your signature this result that your thread approuches and visits by most of the viewers and after that this story rock on this forum.

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Nice update bhai. I read whole update of story and it is really faboulus the good thing about the story is plot and simplicity but if you try to publish your story by giving the link of story in your signature this result that your thread approuches and visits by most of the viewers and after that this story rock on this forum.

Nice update bhai.

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UPDATE 14


Jab rick ke dada ghar aaye to unhone dekha ke rick hath se khun nikal raha tha saayad use blade ya aesa kuch lag gaya tha or jor jor se ro raha par use dekhneka kisi ke bhi paas time nahi tha uski nay mummy yani ke reshma to apne kamre me hi thi. or aeso aaram ki zindi ki maza le rahi thi kyu ke use kuch jyada karna bhi nahi padta tha. bas sara din shopping karo rat ko chuday bas itana hi karna tha kyu ke wo sima ki tarah ghar ka kuch kaam nahi karti thi wo sab to nokaro par sod diya tha.


rick dada ne jese hi dekha unhone jor se kaha bahu ]or thodi hi der me reshma waha par bhag ke aagay.


reshma - kya huva papa

rick ke dada - tume dikh nahi raha he kya huva hain iske hath se khun nikal raha hain or yeh ro raha hain or tumhe kuch fark bhi nahi pad raha hain.


reshma - sorry me kisise bedroom wale phone se baat kar rahi thi [ kyu ke tab mobaile nahi the ] me abhi ise dekh ti hun.

or aese kehke wo rick apne sath le gay or room le jake use dava lagane lagi or dava ke wajah se thoda rick jala or usne fir se jor se rone laga is se reshma ka sir pak gaya or usne ek jor ki chitkoli uske kanthe pe kaati or rick jor se chilane laga par reshma ko koy fark nahi pad raha tha.


rick ke dada room ke keyhole se yeh sab dekh rahe the par wo kuch bhi bole nahi or nicche aagaye or thodi der baad reshma bhi nicche aa gay

reshma - lo papa ho gaya ab me chalti hun muje kuch kaam hain baahar saam ko hi baapas aavungi.

yeh kehkar wo to waha se chal padi uske jaane ke baad rick ke dada rick sath khelne lage kuch der baad raj ghar aaya saayad uski koi file ghar par bhul gaya tha. usne uski file li or ek baar un dono ki taraf dekha or saayad rick chot par bhi dekha par usne kahe bina waha se chala gaya.

uske jaane ke baad wo samaj chuke the ke unke sivay rick koi or is ghar me to hain hi nahi or wo the bhi sahi par rick ke nasib me saayad kisika bhi pyar likha hi nahi tha isilliye hi to 1 saal baad wo chal base ab saayad is duniya me rick ko pyaar karne wala koi nahi bacha tha. sivay uski dost ritu ke par wo bhi kab tak rehta hain dekhte hain.

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